You need to take leave from your work for over one month for personal reasons. Write a letter to your boss. In your letter: • explain the reason for the leave and the length of leave you need • explain how you will keep up-to-date while you’re away • suggest how your work could be covered while you are away

dear Ahmad I am writing to express that I need to take a break from
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for one month. I have been studying English for 5 years ago and I have to take a IELTS exam in one month later in 3rd June.
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I have to read several books
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for
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exam, I can not attend to company for one month. When I am off
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,
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will try to take a class to develop my ability in C++
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so that
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it can help me resolve my issue when I go back to
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I will try to get access with my colleague Hasan to rectify the situation of the company when I was absent. As I mentioned, my colleague Hasan can access me
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Skype.
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furthermore
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he can ask me any question in order to manage the situation.
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I can
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remotely from my home in case
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emergency time that may occurs. I am looking for hearing from you yours sincerely Ali reza

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Make sure to explain your personal reasons more clearly and concisely.
coherence and cohesion
Use clear paragraphs for each main idea to help the reader understand your points better.
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Make the greeting and closing more formal, for example by using 'Dear Mr. Ahmad' and 'Best regards'.
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You clearly stated the length of leave needed.
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You mentioned how you will keep in touch and suggested ways for your work to be covered.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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