You need to take leave from your work for over one month for personal reasons. Write a letter to your boss. In your letter: • explain the reason for the leave and the length of leave you need • explain how you will keep up-to-date while you’re away • suggest how your work could be covered while you are away

dear Ahmad I am writing to express that I need to take a break from

work

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for one month. I have been studying English for 5 years ago and I have to take a IELTS exam in one month later in 3rd June.

because

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Because

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I have to read several books

for preparing

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to prepare

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for

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exam, I can not attend to company for one month. When I am off

work

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will try to take a class to develop my ability in C++

that

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so that

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it can help me resolve my issue when I go back to

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Furthermore

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I will try to get access with my colleague Hasan to rectify the situation of the company when I was absent. As I mentioned, my colleague Hasan can access me

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via

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Skype.

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furthermore

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furthermore,

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he can ask me any question in order to manage the situation.

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Also

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I can

work

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remotely from my home in case

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emergency time that may occurs. I am looking for hearing from you yours sincerely Ali reza

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Jul 6, 2025

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task achievement

Make sure to explain your personal reasons more clearly and concisely.

coherence and cohesion

Use clear paragraphs for each main idea to help the reader understand your points better.

coherence and cohesion

Make the greeting and closing more formal, for example by using 'Dear Mr. Ahmad' and 'Best regards'.

positive

You clearly stated the length of leave needed.

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You mentioned how you will keep in touch and suggested ways for your work to be covered.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

167 words

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