The map below shows the development of the village of Ryemouth between 1995 and present. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The map below shows the development of the village of Ryemouth between 1995 and present. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The map below shows the development of the village of Ryemouth between 1995 and present. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The given maps depict the changes that have taken place in Reymouth Village since 1995.
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, an increase in residential and recreational areas has been the major trend. Beginning with the north-west of the village, with respect to a road with housing around it, it is expanded
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two houses are erected below it.
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, the number of housing
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the road is increased. Concerning the north-east, there used to be a farmland and a forest park, which
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converted into a golf course and an area for people to play tennis
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. Moving onto the south-west of the map, the fish market below the road is replaced with several apartments
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the shops above it
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turned into restaurants. There was
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a fishing port below the fish market, which has been demolished. In connection with the south-east, there
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not been many alterations, just a car park
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put up next to the hotel.

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Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • development
  • village
  • Ryemouth
  • 1995
  • present
  • houses
  • small school
  • residential areas
  • amenities
  • population
  • increased
  • growth
  • expansion
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