Write a letter of invitation to your parents. In the letter: – Explain that you have completed your studies – Give details of the event, including time, date and dress code – Let them know how many tickets they have and who they are for?

Dear Mom and Dad, How have you both been? It's been ages since our
last
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meet. I just want to invite you to our school's Christmas Gala. Since I took the
last
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exam two days ago, I
finalized
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finalised
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my studies for
this
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semester -two projects
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along
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, along
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with many surveys. So it seems that I'
m
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going to pass successfully through next semester without
fail
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failing
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courses. I'
m
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so excited to meet with you
in
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at
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this
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annual event.
This
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program will be held in
Hilton
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the Hilton
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Hotel Lobby between 6 p.
m
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. and 9 p.
m
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. on December 25 -on Saturday. Since
this
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is a
religional
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religious
party, all dress codes are acceptable, but it might be great to
take
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wear
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casual dress. I've just
hold
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held
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two tickets for your coming because
this
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event will host over
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a hundreds
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hundreds
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hundred
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people
who
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, who
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other
student's
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students'
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parents
and
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, and
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that's why
school
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the school
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administration restricted us
by
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to
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parents only. Let me know what you think about
this
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invitation. I missed you so much! The warmest love,  Ozguk.

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coherence and cohesion
Make sure to break your letter into clear paragraphs to help with the flow.
task achievement
Try to be more careful with spelling and grammar to make your message clear.
coherence and cohesion
Consider using a clearer introduction to state the purpose of your letter right away.
task achievement
You did a great job of expressing excitement and warmth in your invitation.
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The details you included about the event are clear and helpful.

The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

Topic Vocabulary:
  • accomplishment
  • celebration
  • ceremony
  • decorum
  • exclusive
  • invitations
  • milestone
  • presence
  • significant
  • spirit of the occasion
  • venue
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