Write a letter of invitation to your parents. In the letter: – Explain that you have completed your studies – Give details of the event, including time, date and dress code – Let them know how many tickets they have and who they are for?
Dear Mom and Dad,
How have you both been? It's been ages since our
last
meet. I just want to invite you to our school's Christmas Gala.
Since I took the Linking Words
last
exam two days ago, I Linking Words
finalized
my studies for Use the right word
finalised
this
semester -two projects Linking Words
Linking Words
along
with many surveys. So it seems that I'Punctuation problem
, along
m
going to pass successfully through next semester without Use synonyms
fail
courses.
I'Replace the word
failing
m
so excited to meet with you Use synonyms
in
Change preposition
at
this
annual event. Linking Words
This
program will be held in Linking Words
Hilton
Hotel Lobby between 6 p.Correct article usage
the Hilton
m
. and 9 p.Use synonyms
m
. on December 25 -on Saturday. Since Use synonyms
this
is a Linking Words
religional
party, all dress codes are acceptable, but it might be great to Correct your spelling
religious
take
casual dress.
I've just Verb problem
wear
hold
two tickets for your coming because Wrong verb form
held
this
event will host over Linking Words
Correct article usage
a hundreds
hundreds
people Fix the agreement mistake
hundred
who
other Punctuation problem
, who
student's
parents Check wording
students'
and
that's why Punctuation problem
, and
school
administration restricted us Correct article usage
the school
by
parents only.
Let me know what you think about Change preposition
to
this
invitation. I missed you so much!
The warmest love,
Ozguk.Linking Words
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coherence and cohesion
Make sure to break your letter into clear paragraphs to help with the flow.
task achievement
Try to be more careful with spelling and grammar to make your message clear.
coherence and cohesion
Consider using a clearer introduction to state the purpose of your letter right away.
task achievement
You did a great job of expressing excitement and warmth in your invitation.
task achievement
The details you included about the event are clear and helpful.
The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,