Write a letter to your friend who is visiting a city that you know well. -Recommend places worth visiting. -Where to eat. -How to get around the city.

Dear Andrei, I am

wrinting

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writing

to you regarding your visit to Santiago, since I live

here

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here,

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I would like to give you some friendly

advices

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advice

to make your

stance

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stay

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unforgettable.

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first

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the first

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place, you should

defenetly

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definitely

go to the Bahaí Temple located near

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apply

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the

mountainchain

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mountain chain

of Los Andes

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. this

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this

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place has the most beautiful

seesights

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sights

of the city. Afterwards, I am sure you would love to visit Santa Lucia’s Hill, it is a unique historical landmark

that is

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located

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downtown.

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, I am sure you will enjoy our local

cusine

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cuisine

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, you should try El Ancla restaurant, it is a typical Chilean seafood place, I suggest you

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eat the crab cake that they

serve

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serve,

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there

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which

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is the best

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the city.

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, the best manner to explore the area is the subway, not only because of its

convinience

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convenience

but

also

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it is the safest way to get around without getting lost since they

got

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have

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maps in every station. Looking forward to

have

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hearing

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news from you. Best wishes. Tomás Alcaide

tom.alcaidesa

Jul 7, 2025

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task achievement

Check your spelling and grammar, especially words like 'definitely' and 'cuisine'.

coherence and cohesion

Organize your ideas clearly into paragraphs: one for places, one for food, and one for getting around.

coherence and cohesion

Make sure to have a nice opening and closing to improve the greeting and closing structure.

task achievement

You provided good recommendations for places to visit.

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The friendly tone of the letter is warm and inviting.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

172 words

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