Write a letter to your friend who is visiting a city that you know well. -Recommend places worth visiting. -Where to eat. -How to get around the city.

Dear Andrei, I am
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to you regarding your visit to Santiago, since I live
here
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I would like to give you some friendly
advices
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advice
to make your
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unforgettable.
On
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first
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the first
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place, you should
defenetly
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definitely
go to the Bahaí Temple located near
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the
mountainchain
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mountain chain
of Los Andes
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. this
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this
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This
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place has the most beautiful
seesights
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sights
of the city. Afterwards, I am sure you would love to visit Santa Lucia’s Hill, it is a unique historical landmark
that is
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located
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downtown.
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, I am sure you will enjoy our local
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cuisine
.
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, you should try El Ancla restaurant, it is a typical Chilean seafood place, I suggest you
to
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eat the crab cake that they
serve
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serve,
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there
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is the best
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the city.
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, the best manner to explore the area is the subway, not only because of its
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convenience
but
also
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it is the safest way to get around without getting lost since they
got
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have
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maps in every station. Looking forward to
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hearing
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news from you. Best wishes. Tomás Alcaide

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task achievement
Check your spelling and grammar, especially words like 'definitely' and 'cuisine'.
coherence and cohesion
Organize your ideas clearly into paragraphs: one for places, one for food, and one for getting around.
coherence and cohesion
Make sure to have a nice opening and closing to improve the greeting and closing structure.
task achievement
You provided good recommendations for places to visit.
task achievement
The friendly tone of the letter is warm and inviting.
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