The map describes the changes which took place in a town called Frenton over 22 years, starting from 1990.

The aforementioned map illustrates the development of the town of Frenton

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over a 22-year period, from 1990 to 2012.

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, the amenities and infrastructure improved significantly.

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, there are more flats built. The playing fields and houses have been developed into blocks of flats. A new and modern flat was

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built next to the block of flats.

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, the cafe, park and trees have become a technopark, a hotel and a golf course.

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, the bank was fully shut down and replaced by a restaurant for dining.

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, the hospital has grown vastly to accommodate more patients.

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, the music theatre is now operating as a movie cinema.

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, the shops located south of Frenton have morphed into a supermarket.

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, there are still a few buildings that remain the same.

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, the school. It is located to the northwest of the hospital.

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, the library is in the same area, which is to the south of the hospital.

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Jul 7, 2025

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