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With the rise of ebook comes the decline of paperwork some people see this as a good step forward while others do not. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend.

There is no denying the fact that online
books
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 are widely used by consumers recently.
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 it is a commonly held belief that people turning to use e-
books
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 is a good development, there is
also
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 an argument that decreasing
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on
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of
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 paper
books
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do
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 not considered
as
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an
advance
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advanced
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 step for humanity and it
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has
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 big issues.
This
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this
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 topic from both points of view and express my opinion. On one hand, digital
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have
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great
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a great
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 role
on contribute
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in contributing
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on
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to
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 keeping nature and
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reducing
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pullation
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pollution
.
On
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 other words, when people use them
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, the
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 need
of
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for
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 using
pepers
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paper
 will disappear over time, which
make
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makes
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 governments and factories stop
cuting
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cutting
 trees to make
papers
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paper
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.
In addition
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, the quantity of waste will decrease, whether resulting from companies or individuals.
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,
according to
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 research
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hold
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 in America,
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the
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percent
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percentage
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 of paper
wasting
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 is reducing by 60% compared to the previous 10 years.
On the other hand
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,
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e-books
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books
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causes
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cause
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to
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a lot of losses for many companies and agents , and even authors. It is
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people's
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for
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of
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 them
are
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 illegal. So many
business
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businesses
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 have become broken and closed
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.
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, when users get them
other
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from other
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 than the main
publisher
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publisher,
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 like some friend sharing them or from unreliable
sourses
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sources
, the
compaines
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companies
 and others will not get their profits, which is considered unfair to them. In conclusion, there are no easy answers to
this
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 question. ON balance,
however
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. I tend to believe that
e
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e-books
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books
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 are beneficial and a significant achievement in
this
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 era.
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Also
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 countries should put
a
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apply
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strics
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strict
 laws to keep
citizens
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citizens'
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 rights.

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coherence and cohesion
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Improve sentence structure and grammar to make your points clearer.
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You addressed both sides of the argument, which is good for balance.
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Your conclusion states your opinion clearly, which is important.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • ebook
  • paperwork
  • accessibility
  • advantage
  • disadvantage
  • students
  • travelers
  • cheap
  • update
  • feeling
  • holding
  • health
  • eye strain
  • learning
  • information
  • remember
  • pages
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