The pie chart below shows the main reasons why agricultural land became less productive. the table shows how these causes affected 3 regions of the world during the 1990 S.

The pie chart below shows the main reasons why agricultural land became less productive. the table shows how these causes affected 3 regions of the world during the 1990 S.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The pie chart below shows the main reasons why agricultural land became less productive. the table shows how these causes affected 3 regions of the world during the 1990 S.
The blend of the pie chart and the table
explain
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why agricultural lands are less prolific than
what it
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they
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used to be, and
also
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how different continents are affected by each factor during the 1990s.
Overall
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, it is noticeable that
over-gazing
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was the most prominent reason and it had mostly inflicted
the
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Oceania,
while
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Europe was the continent that saw the most harm in terms of total
land
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degradation. By observing the graphs, it can be noticed that less than one-third of worldwide
land
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degradation was allocated to deforestation
which
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had the largest share in Europe by 9.8%. Deforestation had a minor effect on Oceania and North America by 1.7% and 0.2% respectively. In connection with
over-cultivation
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over-cultivation,
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it accounted for 28% of total
land
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erosion of the world, and the figure for Europe was more than double
of
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that for North America
by
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, by
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7.7% to 3.3%. Regarding the
over-gazing
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over-grazing
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, Oceania, with 11.3, had a role in making it the imperative cause for
land
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degradation around the globe.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words land with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • agricultural
  • land
  • productive
  • reasons
  • effects
  • regions
  • soil erosion
  • fertilizers
  • climate change
  • droughts
  • floods
  • farming practices
  • crop yields
  • nutrients
  • decreased
  • health
  • traditional
  • methods
  • areas
  • 1990s
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