The graph below shows the number ofshops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The line graph illustrates the number of stores that closed and the number of new stores that opened in one country from 2011 to 2018.
Overall
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, it can be seen from the graph that
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openings fluctuated more than
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closures over the
year
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.
Firstly
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, let us take a look at
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closures that started at approximately 6300 in 2011. By 2013,
although
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it fell after it increased and reached 7000.
Shop
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closures dramatically declined and reached approximately 500 in 2015.
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,
this
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figure did not remain stable and rose to 5100 after one
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. It decreased slightly and reached 5000 in 2017.
At the end
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of
year
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, it again reached around 5100.
Secondly
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,
on the other hand
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,
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openings began at their highest point at approximately 8500 in 2011. It was sharply decreased to 4000
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, and by 2014 it rose to about 6100
shops
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. It was 4000 stable
shops
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between 2015 and 2016. By the end of the
year
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, it reached 3000
shops
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.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words shop, year, shops with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "stable" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 3 times.
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