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The line graph below shows the household recyclling rates in three different countries between 2005 and 2015. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The line graph below shows the household recyclling rates in three different countries between 2005 and 2015. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph illustrates the proportion of
household
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 recycling for three countries over a six-
year
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 period from 2005 to 2015.
Overall
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, UK and Germany statistics demonstrated an upward trend throughout the timeframe,
while
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France
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 data showed a significant downfall pattern across all nations. By the end of the
year
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, the UK
household
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 recycling proportion recorded the highest ratio, followed by Germany, and
France
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 displayed the lowest percentage. Examining the ratio of
household
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 recycling in UK data in detail, it increased gradually,
initially
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 rising slightly from approximately 35% in 2005 to about 40% in 2007.
This
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 trend levelled off until 2009 before rising steadily to nearly 61% in 2015, which was the highest rate among other nations in the end
year
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.
Furthermore
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, the
household
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 recycling in Germany started at just over 20%, and soared in the subsequent years until reaching its peak of around 58% in the final
year
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.
In contrast
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,
France
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's figures declined dramatically. The most notable change in 2013, when
France
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's proportion plummeted remarkably from its highest percentage at approximately 50% in the initial
year
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 to just over 30% in 2013.
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,
France
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 finished at the lowest percentage
nearly
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, nearly
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 40% in 2015.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words household, france, year with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "data" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "ratio" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "just over" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • line graph
  • household recycling rates
  • trend analysis
  • comparison
  • significant
  • increase/decrease
  • fluctuations
  • plateau
  • progress
  • environmental implications
  • rate
  • peak
  • upward/downward trend
  • percentage
  • consistently
  • period
  • surpass
  • level off
  • stagnate
  • benchmark
  • time frame
  • sustainable practices
  • waste management
  • recycle
  • dispose
  • landfill
  • renewable resource
  • conservation
  • eco-friendly
  • green initiative
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