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The table below gives information about population in Australia and Malaysia in 1980 and 2002. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below gives information about population in Australia and Malaysia in 1980 and 2002. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram illustrates key information about the production of a biofuel called ethanol.
Overall
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it is clear that
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 the process involves three main stages, starting from harvesting plants and trees and ending with processing them in designated factories before it delivers to end users. The ethanol undergoes multiple stages and complex procedures before it reaches consumers.
According to
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 the detailed process, the first stages initiate with harvesting plants and trees that were exposed to sunlight and carbon dioxide through their growth.
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 it will be preprocessed by a special machine that turns
them
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it
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 into cellulose. In the next stage, the processed cellulose is allocated in a factory to be processed with chemicals
such
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 as sugars and microbes to create ethanol.
Thereafter
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, it
utilised
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was utilised
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 as a fuel for various transportation methods like cars, planes, and trucks. These transportation methods are the primary cause of releasing carbon dioxide emissions into the air, which
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is isabsorbsed
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isabsorbsed
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absorbed
 by plants.

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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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