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The maps below show the changes that have taken place in Meadowside village and Fonton, a neighbouring town, since 1962.

The maps below show the changes that have taken place in Meadowside village and Fonton, a neighbouring town, since 1962.
The three pictures illustrate a number of changes which took place in
Meadowside
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 village and the nearby town of
Fonton
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 from 1962 to the present day.
Overall
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,
it is clear that
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Meadowside
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 has undergone significant urbanisation, transforming from a small, isolated village into a developed suburb
that is
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 now directly connected to
Fonton
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. Over time, the gap between the two areas has been filled with various facilities, creating a continuous urban landscape. In 1962,
Meadowside
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 was a small village surrounded by open land, with no infrastructure linking it to
Fonton
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, which lay to the east, with a railway line running through it. By 1985,
Meadowside
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 had become more spacious with the addition of a housing estate, a leisure complex, and a superstore. New roads were constructed, bringing it closer to
Fonton
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. Nowadays,
Meadowside
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 has developed and been renamed as
Meadowside
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 Suburbs. It is in the area between
Meadowside
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 and
Fonton
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 that a hotel, a train station, and a business park have recently been established. These developments have connected
Meadowside
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 and
Fonton
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 into one large urban zone, showing clear signs of urban integration and growth.

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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words meadowside, fonton with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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