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The table below give information about sales of fuirtruds labelled coffe and banana's in 1999 to 2004 in five European countries.?

The table below give information about sales of fuirtruds labelled coffe and banana's in 1999 to 2004 in five European countries.?
the
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 chart
bleow
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below
showed
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shows
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sales
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 of
fairtrads
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Fairtrade
 labelled
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coffe
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coffee
 and
banana's
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bananas
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 between 1999 to 2004 in
five
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countries
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 in Europe.
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five
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Five
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 European
countries
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 have different
sales
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 of
fairtable
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Fairtrade
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coffe
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coffee
 and
banana's
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bananas
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 from 1999 and 2004 ,and the
sales
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 of
fairtrade
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Fairtrade
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 labelled
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coffe
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coffee
 and
banana's
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bananas
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were
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apply
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increase
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increased
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 and
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rise
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rose
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 significantly over
period
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time
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apply
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.
the
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uk
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UK
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,
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increase
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the increase
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sales
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in sales
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 of
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coffe
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coffee
form
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from
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 1999 to 2004 is 1.5 and 20 ,
also
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 Switzerland
had
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experience
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experienced
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an anoticeable
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anoticeable
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noticeable
rise
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frome
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from
 3 to 6 .
How
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ever
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ever,
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 the belgium and
swedan
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Sweden
experience
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experienced
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 relatively stable
in
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economies in
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countery
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countries
 like
denmark
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Denmark
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the
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, the
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price
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 of
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coffe
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coffee
 in
European
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Europe
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 showed a slight
increase
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form
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from
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 8 to 2 between 1999 and 2004 .
Five
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Europe
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European
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countries
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were
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experienced
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rise
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a rise
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 in
price
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 and
drop
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a drop
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 in
price
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form
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from
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 1999 to 2004
,
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.
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over
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 the period,Switzerland
have
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had
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highest
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the highest
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rise
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 in
price
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for
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, for
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belgium
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Belgium
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in
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apply
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1999
to
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apply
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2004 (15 and 47)
how ever
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,the
uk
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UK
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 have
grow
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grown
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 from 1
.
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apply
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to 5.5
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while
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, while
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sweden
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Sweden
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 and
denmark
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Denmark
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contrary
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, contrary
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 to expectations the prices decline rather
rising
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than rise,
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 but Belgium
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has increase
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increase
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increased
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price
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its price
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 between 0.4 to 4 over the same period.
in
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 conclusion, the chart showed
five
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 different
countries
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sales
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 of fairtrade_coffe and bananas from 1999 to 2004
,
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.
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 Between 1999 and 2004 ,the
price
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 of
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coffe rosr
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coffee rose
 more significantly than that of bananas.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Basic structure: Use less body paragraphs.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words sales, coffe, five, countries, increase, rise, price with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "showed" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "rise" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "significantly" was used 2 times.
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