You are a member of an International Students' club. The club is organizing an event to celebrate popular food from around the world. Write a letter to the event organizer, Luis. In your letter offer to make a popular dish from your country describe what this dish is explain why it should be included in the event

Dear Luis Thank you for the invitation to an International Students club event. It is an

honor

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honour

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for us to be here and to present

Grave

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the Grave

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and unconquerable Ukraine. We would like to offer the following dish that best represents our

participants

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participants'

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diversity to others, and

this

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dish is the visiting card of the national cuisine. Borscht is not the first course soup

that is

Linking Words

prepared in pork broth and potatoes, cabbage, carrots

onions

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, onions

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tomato

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, tomato

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juice

sweet

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, sweet

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peppers

and

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, and

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spices

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, me

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added to taste. I think

this

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dish should

He Included

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be included

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because it affects our cultural

identity

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identity,

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besides

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it is delicious and healthy In conclusion, Ukrainian cuisine is

dishes multinational

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diverse

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and borscht is one of those.

krisjeffay

Jul 12, 2025

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coherence and cohesion

Add a clear introduction and conclusion.

task achievement

Make sure to explain the dish in more detail.

coherence and cohesion

Check grammar and spelling for better clarity.

suitable writing tone

The letter has a warm and friendly tone.

complete response

Borscht is a good choice to represent your culture.

The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
12
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

<4

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

116 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

culinary
heritage
ingredients
preparation
flavors
cultural exchange
traditional
popular dish
celebrate diversity
international cuisine

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