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The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The maps illustrate how the Central
Library
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 has developed from 20 years ago to the present.
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, it can be seen that the Central
Library
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 has undergone several significant transformations over the past two decades.
Although
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 the layout remains relatively unchanged, the areas dedicated
for
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traditional
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the traditional
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 learning approach are converted into a rather
digitized
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 facility, a leisure space, and a meeting area. Twenty years ago, when an individual entered the
library
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, there was an enquiry desk on the right and a reading
room
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 on the left.
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, tables and chairs were placed at the
center
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 of the
library
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, where adult fiction, non-fiction and children’s
books
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 were available for visitors. The
library
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also
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 had CDs, videos and computer games for relaxation. Today, the enquiry desk has transformed into a cafe, with an information desk and
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 machines
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nearby. The reading
room
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 has changed to a computer
room
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and
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 the children’s book
room
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 has been replaced by a lecture
room
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. All reference
books
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, adult fiction
books
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, and children’s fiction
books
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 are now
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available reading options.
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, the
library
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 has launched storytelling events with sofas provided for listeners.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words library, room, books with synonyms.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • floor plan
  • public library
  • layout
  • reading area
  • computer station
  • multimedia section
  • children's area
  • reference section
  • study cubicles
  • shelving units
  • digital media
  • technological advancements
  • user behavior
  • accessibility
  • traffic flow
  • modernization
  • community needs
  • conversion
  • allocation
  • removal
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