Some people say learners should start their debating and presentation skills in their early age rather than in their higher institutes. To what extent you agree?

Many people believe that
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should start their logical thinking and
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in their universities. In
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should learn how to carry on a discussion with someone properly and without hesitation.
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would help them to understand the way they should communicate and handle the situations in their higher level of education
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at work after studies. It is of paramount importance to
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to be politicians or lawyers in their future.
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difficulties or thinking problems that are causing them to fail in their jobs
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in their
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studies.
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that
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should improve in their early childhood is presentation.
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are most interested in occupations
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as presenting or teaching.
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, if a student chooses to work as a teacher, he or she has to be able to present clearly.
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may lead them to be brighter and
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among others in the school. In conclusion, I would completely agree with
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considering the benefits that
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get from developing these skills at their early age.

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Make your introduction clearer with a specific opinion statement on the topic.
coherence and cohesion
Use more linking words to connect your ideas and paragraphs better.
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Provide more specific examples to support your points, which will make your argument stronger.
coherence and cohesion
Check your grammar and sentence structures to make your writing clearer.
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You clearly state the importance of debating and presentation skills for future careers.
coherence and cohesion
Your conclusion nicely summarizes your main point of view.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general
Topic Vocabulary:
  • debate
  • presentation
  • skill
  • communicate
  • confidence
  • child
  • develop
  • earlier
  • teach
  • learn
  • important
  • future
  • career
  • school
  • critical
  • thinking
  • social
  • respect
  • teamwork
  • viewpoint
  • express
  • idea
  • clear
  • foundation
  • information
  • area
  • challenge
  • persuasion
  • early
  • exposure
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