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As computers translate quickly and accurately, some people think that learning foreign languages is a waste of time. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays,
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 to the view that knowing other languages is
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 of time, because our devices can translate fastly and correctly through the progress of artificial
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intelligence
,
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 others think that learning the
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 of other
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 is very important and helpful. I completely disagree
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 idea, as knowing
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a foregin
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foregin
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foreign
language
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 has plenty of advantages and
translate
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 programs can not always help us. On the one hand, some think that
people
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 should learn
other
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language
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 to communicate without trusting completely
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 programs,
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 I am not an
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exception
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. First of all, many
people
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 have
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 applications on their computers, mobile phones or tablets,
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nevertheless
they
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, they
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 might not be
helpfull
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helpful
 always. If individuals can not reach their device, they can not communicate with
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foregin
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foreign
people
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.
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, in some places which has not good internet connection, online programs will not be
usefull
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useful
. In
this
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 situation, you should have
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 knowledge to
innteract
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interact
 with other
people
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 or get help.
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Additionally
, learning
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a foregin
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foregin
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foreign
language
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 is not just for
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 with other
people
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, it has a lot of advantages.
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, when
people
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 know
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English
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, they are able to use all
aplications
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applications
 without getting help
or
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, or
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 it would be easy to study abroad, which can create new career opportunities for you.
On the other hand
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, others believe that
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translation
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 apps would be enough for living abroad or
interract
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interacting
 with
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foregin
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foreign
people
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. First and foremost, with the development of AI and
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translation
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 technology,
people
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 can easily understand what other
people
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say
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.
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, new model phones have live
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translation
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thecnology
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technology
, which can
turn
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translate
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to
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into
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 our native
language
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 from what the other person says during the call.
Moreover
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, artificial
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intelligence
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ability
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the ability
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 to translate what you want.
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Additionally
, advanced technology
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chance
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the chance
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 to translate
while
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 texting or talking with someone online. In conclusion,
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the majority
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 of
people
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 are of the opinion that everyone should know some
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foregin languges
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foreign languages
,
whereas
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 think
taht
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that
 it
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waste
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a waste
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 of time, as our devices can translate
real
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in real
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 time and quickly.

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coherence and cohesion
Make sure each paragraph clearly supports your main idea. Think about how your points connect to each other.
task achievement
Try to use simpler sentences with correct grammar. Avoid spelling mistakes, as they can confuse readers.
task achievement
You provide good reasons for why learning a language is important.
coherence and cohesion
You have a clear opinion, which is great for the reader.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Machine translation
  • Nuance
  • Bilingualism
  • Cognitive development
  • Global job market
  • Cross-cultural
  • Technological dependence
  • Language proficiency
  • Cultural identity
  • Authentic interactions
  • National security
  • Linguistic subtleties
  • Cultural references
  • Emotional undertones
  • Cognitive exercise
  • Mental agility
  • Travel experiences
  • Accuracy in translation
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