The diagram below shows how one type of coal is used to produce electricity. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram illustrates the process of producing

electricity

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from coal , showing the different stages from

mine

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the mine

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to the final stage

which

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, which

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is

electricity

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.

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, the process involves 8 main steps, beginning with

mine

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mining

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and ending with

electricity

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,and it is a linear process . At the beginning, the Coal from the mine has been crused,

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the truck took it to the

gas

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filter with some heat , and it produced

Gas

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The subsequent level , cooling the

gas

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and waste heat, is gone After that , the next stage is cleaning

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it goes to a

gas

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power plant.

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, it becomes

electricity

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and gives it to the houses or plants