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The table below shows the production of milk annually in four countries in 1990, 2000 and 2010 Amount intitres Nations 1990 2000 2010 Netherlands 11.262,000 11,155,000 11,466,000 Australia 11,246,000 11,105,000 9,165,000 Tanzania 87,000 1,42,000 156,000 Guatemala 26,000 55,000 84,000

The table below shows the production of milk annually in four countries in 1990, 2000 and 2010 Amount intitres Nations 1990 2000 2010 Netherlands 11.262,000 11,155,000 11,466,000 Australia 11,246,000 11,105,000 9,165,000 Tanzania 87,000 1,42,000 156,000 Guatemala 26,000 55,000 84,000
The given table compares
milk
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 production in four countries — the
Netherlands
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,
Australia
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,
Tanzania
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, and
Guatemala
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 — between 1990 and 2010.
Overall
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, the
Netherlands
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 and
Australia
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 produced significantly more
milk
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 than
Tanzania
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 and
Guatemala
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 throughout the period.
While
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 the
Netherlands
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 and
Guatemala
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 saw slight increases, production in
Australia
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 and
Tanzania
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 declined. In 1990, the
Netherlands
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 produced 11,262,000
litres
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 of
milk
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, and
this
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 figure rose slightly to 11,466,000
litres
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 by 2010, despite a small drop in 2000.
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,
Australia
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 started at 11,246,000
litres
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, but
this
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 number declined steadily to 9,165,000
litres
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 over the twenty-year period.
Tanzania
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 produced 87,000
litres
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 of
milk
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 in 1990, and
this
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 amount decreased slightly to 1,55,000
litres
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 by the end of the period.
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,
Guatemala
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 had the lowest production
initially
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 (26,000
litres
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), but experienced continuous growth, reaching 84,000
litres
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 in 2010.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words milk, netherlands, australia, tanzania, guatemala, litres with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "declined" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slight" was used 3 times.
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