The pie charts show the amount of electricity produced using five different sources of energy in France in 1995 and 2005.

The pie charts show the amount of electricity produced using five different sources of energy in France in 1995 and 2005.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The pie charts show the amount of electricity produced using five different sources of energy in France in 1995 and 2005.
The given pie charts indicate the comparison of
energy
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produced using different non-renewable sources , namely, gas, coal, nuclear,
petroleum
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, and other resources, in France during 1995 and 2005. It is observed that the different fuels were used in both years , and coal, gas and
petroleum
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contributed largely to the electricity production in France. In 1995, nuclear and other resources had the lowest contribution to
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energy
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production, and increased minimally to reach 10.10% and 9.10% in 2005, respectively. It
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that, in 1995, coal was the largest contributor to
energy
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production among French people and experienced a growth after a 10-year period and went up gradually, wittnessing 30.93%.
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, gas and
petroleum
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were equally important in 1995, recording a minimal rise in 2005, from 29.27 per cent to 19.55 per cent , respectively.
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, all various sources of
energy
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increased over one decade gradually, except
petroleum
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, which had a slight rise.

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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words energy, petroleum with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "rise" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "gradually" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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