The diagram below shows how fabric is manufactured from bamboo. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The given picture illustrates the process of making

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bamboo

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a bamboo

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textile.

Overall

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, making

bamboo

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cloth includes nine steps from planting

bamboo

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plants to

ready

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the finished

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product.

In the

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The

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early stage of

process

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the process

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begins with obtaining raw material.

Firstly

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,

bamboo

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trees are planted during the spring. After one season, grown

bamboo

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trees are harvested by farmers and

bamboo

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branches are cut into strips where the industrial process begins. In the following step,

cut

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the cut

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bamboo

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is sent directly for crushing strips for making liquid pulp. At the fifth stage, these strips are filtered to separate long

fibers

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fibres

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from the

liquid

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liquid,

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then

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,

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apply

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fibers

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fibres

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are softened by adding water and amino oxide. In the next stage, fabric production begins.

Finished

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The finished

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thread is spun

and

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, and

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it becomes

ball

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a ball

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of yarn. In the eighth step,

ball

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a ball

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of yarn is woven

for making

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to make

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cloth. At the final step,

this

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fabric is made into

finished

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a finished

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product

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such

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, such

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as clothes for sale.