The charts below shows the number of working hours per week, in industrial sector, in 4 European countries in 2002.

The charts below shows the number of working hours per week, in industrial sector, in 4 European countries in 2002.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The charts below shows the number of working hours per week, in industrial sector, in 4 European countries in 2002.
The bar charts compare the
time
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that industrial
employees
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spent every
week
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in 4 different European areas: France, Denmark, Sweden and
The
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UK, in 2002.
Overall
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, it took workers
the
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average
time
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about 36 to 40
hours
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per
week
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to
work
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, except
France
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in France
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.
In addition
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, it was clear that
The
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UK is the country having the habit of working overtime. Regarding the
working-hour
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working hours
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in Denmark, it often fell around 36 and 40
hours
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with
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the highest rate at 70%
while
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the second that from 31 to 35
hours
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a
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week
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week,
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just
stood
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at about 25%. In Sweden,
employees
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also
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spent the same working
time
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as Danish, with 80% and about 40% willing to
work
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about 36-40
hours
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or 31-35
hours
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, respectively; but there was a variety in the distribution of
time
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for working with the result of the workaholics, who could spend the amount of 41 to 45
hours
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per
week
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accounted for nearly 30% of Sweden's workforce. Similar to each other, the trend of working overtime was not seen too much in
both
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either
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countries
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country
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. In terms of France, with the high development of the industry, French workers were required to
work
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more
with
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, with
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the proportion of people working from 46 to 50
hours
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a
week
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making
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up
for
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apply
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20% of the total labour market. In 2002,
while
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in the UK, people's working-hour consumption was at the peak
with
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half of industrial
employees
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working until they achieved at least 36
hours
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per
week
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, almost all French
work
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from 31-35
hours
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with the same rate.
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, the situation
that
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where
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employees
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work
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more than the average working
time
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seems common in these two industrial countries, with around 50
hours
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working
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at about 20%.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words time, employees, week, hours, work with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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