The diagram below shows how ethanol fuel is produced from corn.

The diagram below shows how ethanol fuel is produced from corn.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The diagram below shows how ethanol fuel is produced from corn.
The chart illustrates the
process
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of producing ethanol fuel from corn and the measures of
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campaign.
Overall
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, the
process
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contains 9 steps,
thus
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, beginning with some basic materials and storing,
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at the end
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of the
process
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is storing and transporting.
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with, at these first steps, we can easily see that corn is stored for a long time before milling it and
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boiled with water to become a mixture for about 4 hours.
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, after 4 steps, we start to ferment
this
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product
approximately
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48 hours and next to
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this
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process
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starts to separate to liquid
by
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from
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solid
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the solid
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by-product
and
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, and
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then
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this
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mixture will
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be
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Ethanol at 5 hours and continue storing in a plastic container before using in transporting.

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words process with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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