The maps below show a plan of a city in 1950 and at the present. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps below show a plan of a city in 1950 and at the present. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The maps below show a plan of a city in 1950 and at the present. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The maps show a plan of a
city
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in 1950 and the present. In 1950, the population was 20,000, and now it is 200,000. Many changes happened during
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time.
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, the
city
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is much bigger than before, with more houses and buildings. The population increased a lot, and the
city
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became more modern and developed. In 1950, there was a business district in the middle, a government building, and some roads. There was
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a river with no bridges and an airport in the southeast. There were not many places for people to live. Now, the
city
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has more buildings and roads. The residential areas are bigger and cover most of the
city
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. There are now two bridges across the river and two lakes inside the
city
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. More government buildings were built, and the airport is still in the same place.
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, the major road goes across the
city
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now.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 83%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words city with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "show" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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