The map below shows the plan of a museum in 1998 and after some changes were made in it in 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The map below shows the plan of a museum in 1998 and after some changes were made in it in 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The map below shows the plan of a museum in 1998 and after some changes were made in it in 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The two presented maps detail the museum's plan before and after improvements over the period of 1998 and 2008. Looking from an
overall
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perspective, it is readily apparent that museums underwent several relocations and additions. In 1998, the permanent
exhibition
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rooms were located on both
top
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sides of the building, two on the eastern side and one on the western side.
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, after the advancements, they were fully located on the east,
while
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a cafe situated between the
exhibition
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rooms was twofold reduced and connected to a WC .
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, in 2008, in a garden situated in the centre was constructed various fountains and a cafe sitting area
at
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were constructed at
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the top of it, whilst the entrance and exit, where tickets were sold, remained unchanged.
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, a shop, WC, and a place
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where bags and coats were purchased were placed in the bottom right-hand corner. Having been converted into the "bags and coats" and the shop, the temporary
exhibition
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room was doubled and relocated to the west , beside the garden. Near the temporary
exhibition
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room and the cafe, the new restaurant was set up.

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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words exhibition with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • rectangular shape
  • central garden area
  • symmetrically arranged
  • expanded galleries
  • visitor flow management
  • temporary exhibition space
  • permanent gallery
  • visitor facilities
  • customer service focus
  • dedicated children's area
  • expanded restroom facilities
  • museum gardens
  • unoccupied outdoor space
  • shift towards long-term exhibits
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