You are going on a month training programme to the UK and know that the head of the course would like one of the participants to be the social events' organiser. Write a letter to the Training Organiser. In your letter • expressing your interest in the role • requesting more information about it • explaining what experience you have

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to let you know that I am keenly interested in the position of social events

organiser

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. I have been looking for

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opportunity for a long time, but I have not had a chance to show my expertise. From the pamphlet provided on the program website, I got to know that the students are supposed to send their resume directly to the head of the course in order to apply for

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position, and I have already sent my resume to you. But I would like to get some insight on the benefits of becoming the

organiser

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; will a certificate be issued

at the end

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of the training program for

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volunteer work? What criteria will be used to select the student for

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position? It would be great if you could provide these details at your earliest convenience.

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, I would like to tell you about my experience as an event

organiser

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at my university in Canada. I have been working there as a volunteer to organise business conferences, social meetings, and cultural festivals.

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, I have been awarded the best event

organiser

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in college

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year. If given a chance, I will do my best to make

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event successful. Thank you for your time and consideration. Yours sincerely, Simranpreet Kaur

bhullarsimran2121

Jul 19, 2025

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coherence and cohesion

Make sure each paragraph has a clear main idea.

task achievement

Add a few more details about what specific events you would like to organize.

tone

Great use of polite language throughout the letter.

task achievement

Clear statement of your interest in the role and relevant experience.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

220 words

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