The diagram below shows how ethanol fuel is produced from corn. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows how ethanol fuel is produced from corn. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The diagram below shows how ethanol fuel is produced from corn. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The flow chart illustrates the steps of
ethanol
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fuel production from
corn
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. There are 11 stages in the whole
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ethanol making
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process
beginning
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, beginning
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with picking
corn
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from
field
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the field
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to transporting. In
this
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essay, whatever
takes
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is required
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for
high quality
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ethanol
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fuel to come off is going to be explained in detail. First of all, the picked
corn
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is stored and
then
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milled. After that
water
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, water
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is added to the mixture and it is cooked. It takes four hours for the
corn
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and water
blending
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apply
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to
become cooked
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cook
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.
Next,
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it is kept in a stable environment for 48 hours for fermentation. It is the most
time consuming
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stage in the whole process. After the mixture of water and
corn
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is fermented, it is sent for segregation. At
this
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stage, a solid by-product is separated
and
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, and
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the remaining liquid is
then
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purified until
ethanol
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is taken out.
Finally
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, the extracted
ethanol
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fuel is stored for the second time and transported to the customers.

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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words ethanol, corn with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • ethanol
  • corn
  • harvesting
  • milling
  • cooking
  • fermentation
  • distillation
  • dehydration
  • enzymes
  • fermentable sugars
  • concentration
  • anhydrous ethanol
  • fuel
  • processed
  • mixture
  • yeast
  • carbon dioxide
  • high temperatures
  • surface area
  • separation
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