The charts below give information on the location and types of dance classes young people in a town in Australia are currently attending. Summarise the information by seecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below give information on the location and types of dance classes young people in a town in Australia are currently attending. Summarise the information by seecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The charts below give information on the location and types of dance classes young people in a town in Australia are currently attending. Summarise the information by seecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie
chart
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illustrates the percentage of four
dance
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classes
places
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(private
studios
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, school
halls
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, college-based
studios
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and community
halls
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&
other
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locations),
while
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the bar
chart
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shows the
number
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of
students
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dunder
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11
years
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dance
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and between 11
years
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and 16
years
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in
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3 types.
Overall
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, in the pie
chart
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the private
studios
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was the highest percentage, and the college-based
studios
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was the least,
while
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in the bar
chart
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the the
number
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of
students
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dance
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with age under 11 was higher than the
number
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of student between 11 and 16
years
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, the most
students
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with age under 11
dance
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ballet
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compared to modern
dance
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in the
students
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between 11 and 16
years
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, the least
number
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of
students
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under 11
dance
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modern compared to
ballet
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in
students
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between 11 and 16. In the pie
chart
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, the percentage of locations was 48% in private
studios
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, 24% in school
halls
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, 18% in community
halls
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& other places and 10% in college-based
studios
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. In the bar
chart
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, the
number
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of
students
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under 11 who
dance
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ballet
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was 600, about 450 who
dance
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tap and 300 who
dance
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modern,
while
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the
number
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of
students
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from 11 and 16
years
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who
dance
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ballet
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was 300, just over 400 who
dance
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tap and a little bit above 500 who
dance
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modern

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words chart, dance, studios, halls, number, students, years, ballet with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 6 times.
Vocabulary: The word "compared" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 6 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • attending
  • currently
  • location
  • variety
  • ballet
  • hip-hop
  • contemporary
  • jazz
  • venues
  • popularity
  • attendees
  • juxtaposing
  • correlating
  • proximity
  • cultural influences
  • trends
  • anomalies
  • monopoly
  • proportion
  • distribution
  • enrollment
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