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The graph shows electricity production (in terawatt hours) in France between 1980 and 2012. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph shows electricity production (in terawatt hours) in France between 1980 and 2012. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
the
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 line chart provides key information about four different
typs
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types
 of
energy
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 sources in
term
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 of production, in the
period
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 between 1980 and 2012, in France.
Overall
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, it is clear from the graph that Nuclear by far had the highest
energy
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 production in the given
pariod
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period
.
whereas
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 Renewables
almost
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not-existent
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non-existent
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.
According to
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 what is shown, in 1980, Nuclear power was ranked as the second source of
energy
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. It is possible to say that the performance of factories in Nuclear power production rose dramatically over the given
period
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, to a peak in 2010,
aproximately
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approximately
 400 TW-h.
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, Renewables
remaind
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remained
 at the same level over the
period
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 of 30 years.
the
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The
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 figure of
thermal
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the thermal
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 source shows a crucial change over the given
period
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. In 1980, thermal power generation ranked as the highest, with around 125 TW-h.
but
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But
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 after one year, the figure shows a decline in thermal
energy
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producing
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production
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.
Morever
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Moreover
, the amount of electricity produced by hydroelectric
energy
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 did not have any significant changes, with almost 75 TW-h in all years.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words energy, period with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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