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In recent years, plastic pollution has become a significant environmental issue affecting marine life and human health. What are the main causes of plastic pollution, and what solutions can be implemented to address this problem?

There is no denying the fact that plastic
pollution
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 has become a significant environmental issue affecting marine life and human
health
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.
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 it is a commonly held belief that, over the past few years, there have been more environmental problems,
such
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 as plastic
pollution
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, which has a harmful effect on ocean life and mankind. There is
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argument
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an argument
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 that opposes it. I consider that we must try to reduce
pollution
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 and find different solutions to stop the spread of diseases and
the
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their
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 impact on
health
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 and water.


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 with, solid waste of various types has been a big challenge.
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, when they are burned, they cause air
pollution
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. They
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 destroy the environment and harm animals.
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, the proximity of factories and waste sites to residential areas can lead to serious
health
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 threats. It
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 has an influence on land and marine environments.
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, it may result in CO₂ emissions after being burned.

Another point to consider, many solutions should be proposed to eliminate the harmful effects of
this
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pollution
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. It is
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 possible to say that there should be a search for an appropriate industrial zone located away from residential communities.
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, there should be awareness methods for citizens, as
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 is important for our
health
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 and helps prevent the spread of viruses.
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, it is fundamental to install devices that filter smoke and improve our air quality.

In conclusion, despite people having different views, I believe that both
health
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 and environment and animals are crucial
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to act
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 quickly may lead to serious consequences or failure.

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task achievement
Make sure your introduction clearly states the main points you will discuss in the essay.
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Use more clear examples to support your points and make them stronger.
coherence and cohesion
Try to organize your ideas in a clearer way. Each paragraph should have its main idea and connect well to the next.
coherence and cohesion
Use more linking words and phrases to help the reader follow your ideas better.
task achievement
You recognize the importance of addressing plastic pollution, which is a relevant topic.
coherence and cohesion
Your essay has a clear conclusion that summarizes your views.

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs

The easiest way to score well on the IELTS Task 2 writing portion is to structure your writing in a solid essay format.

A strong argument essay structure can be split up into 4 paragraphs, each containing 4 sentences (except the conclusion paragraph, which only contains 3 sentences).

Stick to this essay structure:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion

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