The chart below shows waste collection by a recycling centre from 2011 to 2015

The bar chart compares the amount of waste in tons from four different sources (paper, glass, tins, and garden) between 2011 and 2015 by a recycling centre.
Overall
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, paper
mostly
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made up the majority of each year
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while
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, while
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waste from the garden took the smallest part consecutively.
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, glass
which
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, which
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usually
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was usually
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placed
second
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second,
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was ranked first once, and tins were always in third place.
To begin
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, nearly 50 of the collected excess was paper in the first two years
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though it experienced a small decline in 2013 before rising back and
finally
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hitting the peak with 70 in 2015.
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, glass only accounted for just below 50 in 2011 and fluctuated a little over the years before finishing at 52 in the
last
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year. In terms of canisters and garden scraps, both of the materials were never made above 40 throughout the given period. As for tins, the minimum number was 27 in
2012
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whereas
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the maximum was 39
at the end
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. Meanwhile, the waste from gardens hit a low point at 15 in the second year before varying and ended up still at the final position with 35 in 2015.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • recycling centre
  • waste management
  • total waste collected
  • trends
  • categories
  • significant increases/decreases
  • analysis
  • public awareness
  • recycling policies
  • implications
  • future strategies
  • sustainable practices
  • waste reduction
  • data interpretation
  • environmental impact
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