Young people who commit serous crimes, such as a robbery or a biolent attack should be punished in the same way as adults. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

There is no denying the fact that the children and the

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should be treated equally in these situations to achieve

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justice for both sides.

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it is a commonly held belief that

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treatment should be less violent than

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cause they do not understand everything in

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life, there is

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an argument that opposes it. In my opinion, I consider that the government does not care just about the adult

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about children and

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or treats them

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with, when the government lets teenagers do what they want the chaos and disaster

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will

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spread in the village.

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, police, security men and even citizen volunteers maybe they are going to be

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victims as other people who have been exposed by the third .

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, the crimes will increase significantly and deaths too, which leads to more corruption

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, my uncle has visited China before. One day , when he was walking through the street normally like any visitor, there was a gang

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attacked him and killed him

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. May God have mercy on him. Another point to consider, the

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are dangerous because their tools, weapons and knives are powerful. It is

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possible to say that the

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are dangerous than the children.

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, you must try to run away or escape from the gangs do not intend to interact with them.

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someone spying on you in public, so you have to think about that and you have two options

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running away or picking up your phone to call the nearest police station. In conclusion, despite people having different views, I believe that as I said in the introduction, the government, laws , and the judges must

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fair to both sides for a better life.