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The table shows the number of universities ranked top 200 in the world in three subjects in five countries. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main points and make comparisons where relevant.

The table shows the number of universities ranked top 200 in the world in three subjects in five countries. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main points and make comparisons where relevant.
The table chart key information about
number
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the number
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 of universities top 200 in three subjects in five countries (2001) . The units are measured in number
subjects
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of subjects
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, it is clear from the graph that the beginning of the USA and the United Kingdom were the highest of the three countries in the three subjects.
According to
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 what is shown, the USA has more than the United Kingdom in Biology, Medicine, and Psychology. In terms of
,
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 Australia and Canada were nearly similar in Medicine and Psychology.
While
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 Canada is still
to
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at
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 the lowest by the end period.

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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
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Introduction: Change the first sentence in the introduction.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 70%.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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