The line chart depicts the figures of foreigners visiting the coast, the lake and the mountain, and series 3 of a European country from 1987 to 2007.

The line chart depicts the figures of foreigners visiting the
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, the
lake
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and the
mountain
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, and series 3 of a European country from 1987 to 2007.
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, the number of people paying a visit to series 3 increased after 20 years.
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, the
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, the
mountain
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and the
coast
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witnessed a reduction in the total
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visitors
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at the end
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of the period. The
coast
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, the
lake
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and the
mountain
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welcomed 40
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and 10
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of
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tourists in 1987, respectively. After some fluctuations, in 2002, the area of the
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and
mountain
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hit the peak at about 75
thousand
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,
while
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the
coast
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witnessed its highest number of
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in about
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with exactly 70,000 people.
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the figure of
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for both locations decreased to below 70
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in 2007. Overseas tourists of Series 3 numbered 20,000 in 1987, doubling the figure of the
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and
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at the same period. From 1988 to about 1993, it suffered from a reduction in the number of
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.
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, from 2002 to 2007,
this
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destination experienced a steady increase and reached its peak in 2007 with about 26,000 people.

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