The graph provides information about the number of closed and opened
shops
Use synonyms
in
Linking Words
particular
nation between 2011 and 2018.
Correct article usage
a particular
Overall
,it can be clearly seen that Linking Words
amount
of opened Use synonyms
shops
was sharply dropped in given period (from 2011 to 2018),Use synonyms
however
in 2014 opened store size was significantly jumped to just above 6,000,Linking Words
in addition
it can be clearly seen that in period from 2015 to 2016 quantity of opened stores leveled off to 4,000,Linking Words
whereas
the closed Linking Words
shops
Use synonyms
amount
was to fluctuate,Use synonyms
furthermore
in 2015 Linking Words
this
Linking Words
amount
was slumped plummeted to about 850.
As can be seen,Use synonyms
opened
Wrong verb form
the number of open
shops
was approximately 8500 in 2011,but was falled to just below 4,000 in 2012Use synonyms
,
Punctuation problem
;
Linking Words
nevertheless
in 2013 and Add a comma
nevertheless,
2014
Punctuation problem
2014,
this
number Linking Words
was
increased to just above 6,000.After Verb problem
apply
standability
in 2015-Check wording
a decline
2017
years Punctuation problem
2017,
Use synonyms
amount
of opened stores Check wording
number
was
dropped to 3,000.
At the onset in 2015 volume of closed markets Verb problem
apply
was
declined to well below Verb problem
apply
from
1,000Change preposition
apply
,even
Punctuation problem
. Even
so
in 2016 sum total Punctuation problem
so,
of
closed Check wording
number of
store
Fix the agreement mistake
stores
was rised
to just bigger Verb problem
rose
then
5,000Linking Words
,
Punctuation problem
.
in addition
in 2017-2018 years Linking Words
this
size Linking Words
was stayed
around 5,000.Verb problem
remained