The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph
illustrate
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illustrates
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information about
average
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the average
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monthly change in the prices of three metals (
Copper
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,
Nickel
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and
Zinc
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) in 2014.
Overall
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, the
Nickel
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has
been descreased
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decreased
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in prices in begging of
month
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the month
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,
whlie
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while
the
Zinc
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has
been
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apply
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increased in begging of
month
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the month
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. The
Nickel
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has decreased in jan from at 6% to at 4%,
while
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the
Zinc
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has increased from at 1% to at 3%, the
Copper
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has decreased from at 2% to 1%, the
Nickel
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remained stable at 1% between Mar and April,
also
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the
Copper
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by at 0.5%, but the
Zinc
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has decreased to 1.5%, after that, the price of
Nickel
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in may to june started decreased from at 0.5% to at -3%,
also
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the
Zinc
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by -1%, whlie in
Copper
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remained stable by 0.5%,
then
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the
Nickel
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started to increased from june to july between at -3% to -1%, and the
Copper
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was at 1%, the
Zinc
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was 0.5%, after that, they remained stable between july and September in the
Nickel
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at -1%, the
Zinc
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at 0.5%, and the
Copper
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at 1%,
then
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the
Nickel
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decreased in oct and became at -2%,
also
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the
Zinc
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at -1% ,the
Copper
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at 0.5%, the
Nickel
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and
Zinc
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increased between Oct to Nov, the
Nickel
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at 1%, and the
Zinc
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at 1.5%, the
Copper
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remainted stable at 0.5%,
then
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the
Nickel
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remained stable between Nov and Dec at 1%,
while
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the
Zinc
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and
Copper
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increased by 1%, the
Zinc
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became at 2%, and the
Copper
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became at 1.5%.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also, while".
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 70%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words copper, nickel, zinc with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "stable" was used 5 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • fluctuate
  • volatile
  • stability
  • peak
  • trough
  • increment
  • decrement
  • steady
  • gradual
  • sharp
  • increase
  • decrease
  • month-on-month
  • average monthly change
  • commodity
  • benchmark
  • trend
  • precipitous
  • plateau
  • significant
  • marginal
  • surge
  • dip
  • plummet
  • soar
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