You recently attended a meeting at a hotel. When you returned home, you found you had left some important papers at the hotel. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter •Say where you think you left the papers •Explain why they are so important •Tell the manager what you want him /her to do

Dear Sir or Madam I am Mohammadreza Hadavi, one of your guests in the event, which

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took place today. I am writing

this

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letter with regard to a problem

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apply

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which I am

faced

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when

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received

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got

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home, I noticed that I

lost

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had lost

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my insurance papers. I believe that I put them on the table, located next to the

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window in

conference

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the conference

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room. Actually, I must give

back them

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them back

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insurance

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the insurance

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company in order to deal with them.

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addition, my private information from personal

detail

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to bank account is on

papers

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, I am a bit

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about accessing someone to them. I have a

kindly

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request, if it

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possible to find and save them for me. I

also

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provided my phone number

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the top of

letter

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. Please, don’t hesitate to call me and request more information about them. I really appreciate your assistance in

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matter. I eagerly wait for your response. Yours faithfully, Mohammadreza Hadavi

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Aug 2, 2025

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format

Make sure to start your letter with 'Dear Sir or Madam,' and end it with 'Yours faithfully,' to follow the correct format.

coherence

Try to use clearer sentences and connect your ideas better for easier reading.

task achievement

Explain why the papers are important more clearly, maybe with a sentence about their importance to your life.

content

You clearly stated where you think you left the papers.

tone

You were polite in your request and expressed appreciation, which is good for tone.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

161 words

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