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The bar chart shows attendence of people in different ages in music events in Australia in 2006. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart shows attendence of people in different ages in music events in Australia in 2006. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given bar chart compares individuals of various ages in terms of their attendance at music events in Australia in 2006.
Overall
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, the most famous events were popular musical festivals for 15-44 year old generations;
however
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, among older people 44 and above,
opera
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 was the dominant genre in
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 category. The proportion of attendance of people in classical music performances was the smallest among almost all age stages.
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 the proportion of popular music performances was between 35% and 40%, that of classical and
opera
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 events was between 10% and 15% in the 15-24 year old generation in 2006.
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, the 25-44 years old generation liked to attend popular festivals mostly; but, the most significant thing is that the proportion of attendance in
opera
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 was the biggest in all its figures among all age groups. Regarding the 45-54 age group, the percentage of
opera
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 was 15%, followed closely by popular gigs with just under 15% and classical performances with 10%.
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, the percentage of
opera
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 was 10%, as opposed to classical and popular festivals, which were approximately 8% and 5%, respectively.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words opera with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 3 times.
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