Some people think that robots are important for humans’ future development. Other think that robot have negative effects on society. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Development of

technology

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brings new

dicussion

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discussion

topics. One of them

about

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is about

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robots

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and

impact

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the impact

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this

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technology

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. Some people argue that robotic

systems

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are

crucial

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crucial,

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while

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other

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others

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say there are some disadvantages for society. I

belive

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believe

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both views have strong arguments. I cannot

be denied

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deny

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that

technology

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provides

convinience

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convenience

in our lives.

Robots

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can help us with work that no one wants to do

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such

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, such

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apply

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collecting garbage, cleaning, dusting, manual labour and dangerous ones. Thanks to

development

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the development

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of robotic

systems

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quality

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the quality

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of life for humans

have

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has

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been improved.

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this

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these

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systems

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are

also

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significant for

progress

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the progress

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of the

technology

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. Scientists benefit from

robots

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for their scientific experiments.

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while

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robots

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can handle

with

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apply

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though

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tough

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jobs

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, people who do these

jobs

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for a living will lose

the

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their

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jobs

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rate

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the rate

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unemployement

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unemployment

will significantly increase in the future.

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, if

robots

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are

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the

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part of other

jobs

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doctor

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doctors

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soldier

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soldiers

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, it can be dangerous for humanity. Since

robots

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do not have any emotions, they kill or heal people insensitively.

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, society will become unemotional and cruel as well. In conclusion, there are both pros and cons about

robots

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However

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from

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my point of view, the disadvantages outweigh the advantages. Unstoppable development of robotic

systems

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may cause crucial problems

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for

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the future society.

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Aug 3, 2025

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coherence and cohesion

Try to make your introduction clearer by stating both sides of the argument more distinctly.

coherence and cohesion

In your conclusion, summarize the main points more clearly to strengthen your argument.

task achievement

Add more specific examples or statistics to support your ideas about the advantages and disadvantages of robots.

coherence and cohesion

Use simple linking words like 'firstly', 'secondly', 'however', and 'for example' to improve the flow of your essay.

task achievement

The essay presents both sides of the argument, showing understanding of the topic.

task achievement

You include some relevant examples, like jobs affected by robots, which helps support your points.

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4
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
26
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

216 words

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Some people think that robots are important for humans’ future development. Other think that robot have negative effects on society. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Some countries spend a lot of money preparing competitors in major sports competition such as Olympic Games and football World Cup etc. It is better to spend money encouraging children take up sports at a young age. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In some cities public parks and open spaces are changed into gardens where local residents can grow their fruit and vegetables. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

Some people suggest that children do not understand the world of work and schools should make all teenagers spend a short time working as well as studying academic subjects. To what extent do you agree?