"Some people believe that your personality doesn't change over time. To what extent do you agree with this idea? Give specific examples to support your opinion.""

The question of whether
personality
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remains fixed or evolves over
time
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has long been a subject of psychological debate.
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some people believe that an individual’s character is unchanged over
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, I think that
personality
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can
change
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to some extent depending on
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experiences and personal growth. On the one hand, it is understandable why some believe
personality
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does not
change
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. Some characteristics ,
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as being introverted or extroverted, seem to remain relatively stable from childhood into adulthood. An extroverted person often stays the stay throughout
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.
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, someone who enjoys talking and socialising from a young age may choose careers like teaching or hosting and remain outgoing even in later years.
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shows that basic
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traits rarely
change
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over
time
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.
On the other hand
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, there is much evidence that suggests that
personality
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can
change
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depending on
life
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experience, environment or personal efforts.
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, Bill Gates , who was once known as a shy and introverted person, but over
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become
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a strong leader and an excellent public and practice, improving his social skills and transforming his
personality
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.
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shows that efforts and determination can lead to significant personal growth. In conclusion,
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some basic
personality
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traits can remain intact, many other aspects can
change
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over
time
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.
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, I believe that
personality
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is formed
due to
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both natural trends and
life
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experiences.

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coherence
Make sure your main points are clearly linked to your argument throughout the essay.
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Try to develop each example more fully to show how it supports your point.
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Your introduction gives a clear overview of your opinion on the topic.
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Your examples, especially the one about Bill Gates, are relevant and interesting.

Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 250 words in writing task 2. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long essay will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 260 to 290 words in writing task 2. This will ensure a concise essay and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 40 minutes to write the essay and you need around 10 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long essay in 30 minutes.

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