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about
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wild
in a place where people can visit the
should not be allowed
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, some people
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that it would be
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since it could protect
from
extinction. In
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of
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and provide my own opinion.
On
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hand, keeping wild species in
has several drawbacks. As those
which live in the zoo have limited spaces and
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could lead to their mental health issues,
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for wild
which were born in the natural forest.
, a polar bear lived in the North Pole and was familiar
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cold
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and
veryCorrect article usage
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large
, but
people keep it in the
where space is limited and
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is not as cold as in the North Pole.
, the polar bear may become
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as it is not
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used to the area.
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the other hand, some animal species in forests are now becoming extinct
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caused by many reasons
as
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disease, being
for
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,
becomingCorrect word choice
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prey for other predator
. If those
remain in
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wildsFix the agreement mistake
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freely and become extinct.
, the balance of
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would be
impacted significantly.
, it is safer to secure them in
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place where we
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take care of them.
, the number of herbivores is much more than carnivores, resulting in
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of opulent green areas where many species depend
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and
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toVerb problem
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of Change preposition
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environmentReplace the word
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problems.
In conclusion,
there may be some
disadvantageFix the agreement mistake
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for
mentalCorrect article usage
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health of
animalFix the agreement mistake
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living in
the Correct article usage
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, I
beliveUse the right word
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that the
advantageFix the agreement mistake
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outweigh the
drawbackFix the agreement mistake
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if
were banned, many issues
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to ecosystem would
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more and more.