The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in 5 Australia cities

The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in 5 Australia cities
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in 5 Australia cities
The diagram gives detailed information about how there are
coffee
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and tea buying and drinking habits in five cities in Australia.
Overall
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,
it is clear that
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there was a dramatic percentage in the figure of Australia, particularly a maltitude people went to a café in the
last
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4 weeks. It is
also
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worth mentioning that there was a decrease in the proportion of people who purchased fresh
coffee
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. Looking at the details, in the chart
Hobart
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, Hobart
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and Melbourne witnessed an increase of approximately 63% of people,
while
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Sydney saw
this
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percentage at 62%.
In contrast
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, Brisbane and Adelaide accounted for 55% and 50% respectively, which shows that the habit was going to the café. For fresh
coffee
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, Sydney and Melbourne made up 44% and 43% of city residents.
However
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, Brisbane had the lowest percentage among the 5 cities — about 33%. For instant
coffee
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, Hobart was the highest consumer with a proportion of 54%.
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, Sydney achieved only 45%.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however".
Vocabulary: Replace the words coffee with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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