The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities.

The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities.
The bar chart illustrates the findings of a poll about people's
coffee
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and tea
consumption
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patterns in Sydney, Melbourne, Brisbane,
Adelaide
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, and
Hobart
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Overall
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,Sydney, Melbourne, and
Hobart
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's
quantity
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quantities
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are predominant in
coffee
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purchasing. Except in Brisbane and
Adelaide
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, where
coffee
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consumption
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are
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is
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relatively smaller.
In contrast
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,
Adelaide
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's
coffee
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consumption
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pattern is the
most
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apply
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smallest in the bar chart. 
According to
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the provided chart, café visits constitute the predominant form of
coffee
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consumption
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among Australians. Specifically,Sydney(61%),Melbourne(64%),and
Hobart
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(63%)
all are
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are all
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outnumbered
60
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by 60
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percent
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per cent
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.
On the other hand
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, Sydney
account
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accounts
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for fresh
coffee
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merely for 44
percent
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per cent
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.,much less Melbourne and
Hobart
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By contrast
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, the highest
of
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apply
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coffee
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consumption
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patterns in Brisbane and
Adelaide
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have even
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even not
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not even
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surpass
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surpassed
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55
percent
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per cent
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yet. At the bottom of the
consumption
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, purchased fresh
coffee
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accounted for the smallest proportion at precisely 34%, marginally below the 35% threshold.
By comparison
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,
consumption
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rates for instant
coffee
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and café visits maintained virtually equivalent percentages.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words coffee, consumption, adelaide, hobart with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • survey results
  • coffee and tea buying habits
  • instant coffee
  • fresh coffee
  • cafe culture
  • social influences
  • economic factors
  • city demographics
  • seasonal trends
  • marketing strategies
  • consumer preferences
  • availability
  • popularity
  • consumption patterns
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