In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry. Why is this the case? What can be done about this problem?

It is a well-discussed topic that there are plenty of starving
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achievements in the agriculture sector. Many factors are responsible for
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issue;
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, social inequality and
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allocation
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of resources are the main causes of famine in today’s world. Global cooperation and special campaigns may alleviate
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problem
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. Social inequality has always pursued mankind since its very beginning and has
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an inseparable part of it.
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, there will always be poor and rich individuals, with different access to
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supplies.
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agriculture is a
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industry now, with the help of synthetic nutrients and a scientific approach,
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are not able to reap the benefits of these equally, because of different opportunities. Individuals who have great wealth at their disposal may take more than needed, and reduce the amount of
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that could be received by
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with lower social status.
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, the USA, which is one of the richest economies in the world, produces millions of tons of
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waste,
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in poor countries,
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as Pakistan or Liberia, famine is a common thing
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.
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illustration perfectly shows how social
infairness
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inequality
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of
food
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supplies led to starvation in modern society. A viable way to address
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burning issue is international work aimed at reducing unfairness in the
allocation
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of vital resources
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as
food
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various world organisations have adopted campaigns that provide financial help to developing countries, but there are still no
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programs that exactly address the
food
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allocation
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and hunger
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.
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, if governments start launching campaigns related to
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problem
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, the percentage of
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who suffer from hunger will drop significantly.
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, ordinary
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can
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play a role in solving the issue of starvation by spurring politicians to pay more attention to
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means that public speeches, posts
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social media related to the
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can substantially accelerate its solution.
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, social inequality and unfair
allocation
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of provisions hinder progress towards a future without hunger
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however
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, if all the countries together try to solve it and individuals pay more attention to it, positive results will be achieved more quickly.

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task response
Plan your essay. Start with a short line that shows your view. Then list 2 main ideas with short facts. End with a clear finish.
coherence cohesion
Use linking words to show how ideas fit, like first, next, also, but, however, therefore. Put one idea in one paragraph.
language use
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content
Clear aim to discuss both causes and fixes.
structure
It has a start, a middle, and a end and some links.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • inequality
  • distribution
  • access to resources
  • climate change
  • natural disasters
  • political factors
  • economic factors
  • agricultural practices
  • infrastructure
  • transportation
  • population growth
  • education
  • knowledge
  • food waste
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