Nowadays, tourists and scientists are allowed to travel to remote natural environments. Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answers and include example from your own experience?

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as crime, song, etc. Some people believe parents should be punished if their children commit crimes.

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idea may make some parents more responsible, I disagree. In

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essay, I will discuss the main reasons for my opinion and suggest better solutions based on real examples from different countries.

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task response

Add a real body that gives 2 or 3 reasons why punishing parents may be unfair, with a simple example for each.

structure

Make a clear plan at the start: say your view, then list 2–3 reasons, then finish with a short end.

coherence

Use easy link words to show how ideas are linked, like and, but, also, for example.

language use

Check grammar and spelling; use one idea per line and fix commas and big gaps.

content

Be clear on the main idea; keep the topic close to the question and give a real example from life or news.

content

You show a clear view: you say you disagree.

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You plan to use real examples from different countries.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

1 paragraphs

54 words

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disadvantage
benefit
risk
impact
nature
wildlife
environment
place
rule
permit
limit
protect
harm
care
learn
study
data
plan
guide
local
people
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