The table shows the number of employees and factories producing silk in England and Wales between 1851 and 1901.

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describes the proportion of employees and factories changed in England and Wales over 5 decades between 1851 and 1901. It is clear from the graph that the number of male employees is higher than that of females during 50 years. The total

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employees in

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countries had a downward trend,

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factories had the opposite trend. Looking at the first chart

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, the quantity of both genders decreased rapidly by roughly 256,000 and 160,000

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, these data led to the total

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workers

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jumped

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significantly from 477,100 to 61,000.

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, there was a

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rise in the

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of manufacturing

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.

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, they still had a variation. From 1851 to before 1881, there was a strong jump

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approximately 500 factories. In 1881,

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figure peaked at 721 workplaces.

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statistic saw a slight decline from 721 to 600 workshops.