The graph below shows the percentage of the population in 4 Asian countries living in cities from 1970 and 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040.

IELTS Writing Task Chart for The graph below shows the percentage of the population in 4 Asian countries living in cities from 1970 and 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040.

The aforementioned line graph illustrates the pattern of the population in 4 various countries between 1970 and 2020, with a forecast for 2030 and 2040.

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, it is crystal clear that the percentage of people living in cities will experience

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biggest increase

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the period.

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, Indonesia are going to be the most

populed

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populous

city compared to the others.

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with, approximately 30% Philippines and Malaysia began trading in 1970, compared to nearly 18% in Thailand. Malaysia's figure climbs past 60% by 2000, and it is expected to reach 80% by 2040, which is the highest level in the chart.

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the lowest urbanisation percentage, it surged sharply from around 13% in 1970 to nearly 60% by the end of the survey, surpassing the two other countries.

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thecPhilippines

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the Philippines

increased a bit in 1990 to 50% ,

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showed

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relatively stable figures, with fluctuations between 50% and 40% throughout the period.

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, Thailand grew steadily to reach 45% by 2040, but remained the least significant throughout the period.

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Aug 9, 2025

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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "reach" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

176 words

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