The diagrams below show a typical American and a Japanese office.

The diagrams below show a typical American and a Japanese office.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The diagrams below show a typical American and a Japanese office.
The pictures compare the work zones of a
tipical
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typical
American
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office
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and a
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typical
Japanese
office
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, showing differences in design and preferences.
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, the Japanese
office
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concludes team workspace and clear manager’s sight,
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the
American
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design focuses on privacy, specialised rooms, and personal workspaces. In the Japanese
office
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, the department manager’s desk is located in the front, facing the entire team. Below them, two section managers sit behind groups of employees who
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rectangular
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furniture
its placement allows
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the manager
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manager
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managers
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to see them.
This
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open placement facilitates easy vision and communication, with everyone in a single shared space.
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, the
American
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office
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zone features more complicated work areas. Department and section managers have private rooms that
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one side of the space, each separated by walls. Employees work in cubes placed in rows in the centre, giving
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private zone.
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, the
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offices include special rooms for copying, storage, and meetings, located along the opposite wall from the
managers’rooms
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managers
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