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The diagram below explains the process of recycling plastic bottles for new uses. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below explains the process of recycling plastic bottles for new uses. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram illustrates how
plastic
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bottles
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 are recycled to serve new uses through a specific procedure.
Overall
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, the process consists of eleven steps commencing with gathering
plastic
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bottles
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 at a recycling
center
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centre
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 in
which
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where
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 an array of processing practices
conducted
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are conducted
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.
First,
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plastic
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bottles
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 are divided into different kinds of containers
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, embodying
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embodying
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including
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 glass and metal
bottles
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.
Next,
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all of them are classified
according to
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color
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colour
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 before
pressed
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being pressed
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 into bales with
the
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a
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 capacity of approximately 7,000
bottles
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 per bale. After that, they are transported to a reclaimer by big trucks. The remaining tasks to create pellets are things the reclaimer is at the helm.
Initially
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, bales are broken apart through a bale breaker. Simultaneously,
plastic
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 is shredded into flakes that
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then are
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are then
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 washed, rinsed, and dried, respectively.
Next,
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flakes are melted and put through an extruder. Eventually, these are converted into pellets ready for
manufactures
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manufacturers
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 to purchase. Those will use complete pellets to create
fibers
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fibres
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 for producing a range of products
such
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 as carpets, clothing, nonfood containers, and others.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "next, ".
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words plastic, bottles with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • collection
  • recycling centers
  • transported
  • recycling plant
  • sorted
  • cleaned
  • impurities
  • shredded
  • flakes
  • melted
  • pellets
  • raw material
  • manufacturing
  • containers
  • clothing
  • recycling loop
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