The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries

The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries
The line graph depicts the percentage of
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people aged 65 and over from 1940 to 2040 in three countries like Japan,
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Sweden
and
USA
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the USA
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.
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, we can see that both the regions
like
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USA
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the USA
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and
Sewden
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Sweden
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, moves
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moves
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in fluctuation and
in moved
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slowly upward
with
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over
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the
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time.
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, the Japan in stating some years moved in dwon side slighty.

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Vocabulary: The word "moves" was used 3 times.
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