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Writing Samples
Band 3

Humans are producing an increasing amount of trash everyday and the world is becoming full of the landfills we use to get rid of our trash. In your opinion, how can recycling save the environment and help the people on Earth?

Increasing
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The increasing
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 amount of trash
everyday
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apply
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produced by humans
aroud
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around
 the world is a great ecological problem for all of us. Landfills become extremely wasted,
moreover
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 nobody
do not have
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has
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 a really working solution to reduce pollution of the
enviroment
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environment
.Nowadays, only recycling can help us
to
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apply
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solve
this
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 task.
In
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From
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 my point of view, it has two main benefits,
I
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which I
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will try to provide
them
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in
this
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 essay.
Firstly
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,
main
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the main
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 reason to use modern
recycle
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recycling
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 technologies.
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,
minumum
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at least
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 50% of
trash
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the trash
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 could be used many times. Plastic, paper,
metal
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and metal
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 are
one
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some
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 of them. In
this
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 case, it is possible to save a huge
amout
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amount
 of an area of the planet. I think we should use
this
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 way of
recycle
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recycling
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 as much as we can.
Secondly
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,
How
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how
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we can
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can we
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 act
:
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?
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People
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 should sort waste at home, use recycling bins, and buy recycled products. Schools and towns can run awareness campaigns and provide good recycling services and rules.Recycling creates jobs in collection, sorting, and processing. It can lower costs for households and cities and make streets cleaner and safer for
people
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. Producing new items from raw materials uses more energy than using recycled materials. Recycling uses less energy, cuts greenhouse gas emissions, and can slow climate change.
To sum up
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,
If
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if
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 more
people
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 recycle well, we save resources, keep the air and water clean, and help
people
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 live healthier and safer lives.

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language
Fix big grammar and spelling mistakes. Use short, clear sentences.
organization
Put one main idea in each paragraph and use easy linking words to connect ideas.
content
Give clear proof or example for each point and stay on topic.
task response
The writer shows a clear view and makes an effort to give reasons.
coherence
The essay uses order words like 'Firstly' and 'Secondly' to show order.

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  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • recycle
  • recycling
  • reduce
  • reuse
  • waste
  • trash
  • landfill
  • pollution
  • pollute
  • energy
  • save
  • emissions
  • greenhouse gases
  • resources
  • paper
  • plastic
  • metal
  • glass
  • curbside
  • bin
  • sorting
  • recyclable
  • non-recyclable
  • compost
  • environment
  • health
  • jobs
  • money
  • city
  • community
  • policy
  • law
  • plan
  • awareness
  • practice
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